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Title: Abandon
Genre: YA Post-Apocalyptic Dystopia
When Darcy Hallow is attacked on her way home, she is taken to a training centre and told that she will now take her sister’s place in Riverside city, where the first born teenagers from each household, between the ages of 14 and 18, are sent to tackle mutants and monsters, protecting their home. But when Raina Hallow goes missing in action, Darcy must complete her term in service and fulfil the requirement. So until Raina is found, Darcy must fight and survive in the deadliest city on earth. She will find out what happened to her sister…or die trying.